Shadowstike, Male Warrior

[Tempest of Reach]

Name: Shadowstrike
Family: N/A
Rank: Warrior
Clan: ThunderClan
Gender: Tom
Age: 54
Eye Color: It looks black as his eyes are constantly dilated
Fur Color: Black
Other Appearances:

Because of his genetic mutation, everything about Shadowstrike his black. Not just his fur and eyes, his claws are black as well. It is like he was made from the shadows.

Personality:

Every seen or read something where there is this ninja guy that never speaks? That is like Shadowstrike. He does speak but doesn’t do it much. A natural loner he was quite ferocious in battle. For a long while he fought to kill and only killed. But things changed and now he doesn’t kill as much. In fact he doesn’t kill without the permission of his first ever friend. Lightfight.

Admitly, he will talk if he has to.

History:

Shadowstrike never knew his parents. For his father was dead before he was born, and his mother died the day he opened his eyes. Shadowstrike never trusted a single cat through some instinct of his. And this instinct has saved his life many times. Shadowstrike was only three moons old when he first fought in a fight and somehow he managed to defeat his opponent. But he did not kill this kit that attacked him but instead nursed him back to health. His payment? The kit he nursed back latter attacked him again with his younger brother fully intending to kill him. He was only four moons old at the time, the other kits where five moons and three moons old respectfully. Yet Shadowstrike managed to kill them all. Every all three kit fell to his claws. It was that day that Shadowstrike emptied himself of emotion. It was also that day when he got his name. From then on he was a wanted cat. Always on the run Shadowstrike travelled from town to town never trusting any cat. Until he met Lightfight.

RP Example:

Cats you RP: 5
Names of cats: Tempestfury, Lightfight, Angelwing, Firesong.
Other:

Can blend into the shadows, coming practicly invisible. Has more knowledge on posions than all other clan cats.

Cats you RP: 5
Names of cats: Tempestfury, Lightfight, Angelwing, Firesong.
Other:

Can blend into the shadows, coming practicly invisible. Has more knowledge on posions than all other clan cats - expect maybe with those who have a sinister interest with posion

[- - F l I c K e R - -]

The rules say realistic eye colors. Somehow I doubt his eyes could be comletely black, unless he's got a weird disease and is totally blind. It would be completely impossible for even a full-grown, fully trained warrior to kill every cat in that mob, so he couldn't have done so at 4 moons. Like with Tempestfury, he can have a lot of knowledge of poisons, but you can't say 'more then clan cats'

[Tempest of Reach]

1. Gave reason why his eyes are black.
2. It was a mob of kits, and he was lucky, very lucky.
3. Why not? clan cats don't exactly fight to kill all of the time do they? Of course, the same can't be said about rouges...

[- - F l I c K e R - -]

1. I still don't think Fast would accept it unless he was completely blind. Genetic mutations can't just recolor the eyes and not do anything else.
2. But they were still all older then him, it's completely impossible.
3. Yes, but medicine cats still have the most knowledge about those things. They have to in order to be able to heal cats.

[echo]

I know I'm not a mod or anything, but I feel I should say something.

The idea of rogue kits roaming around attacking people is extremely unlikely. For one thing they could easily be swatted aside by full-grown cat. Their claws and teeth would hardly have been developed enough to actually seriously wound someone, so a 4-moon old kit killing off an entire group of 'rogue kits' is also rather impossible.

[Tempest of Reach]

Impossible? No.
Improbable? Yes.

[- - F l I c K e R - -]

Lighty, I declare this bio unnaccepted until you make it realistic. It is impossible, no matter what you say, and this bio will not be accepted until you change it. I will also warn you that arguing with staff is against the rules, and I'm warning you, do it to much and you may end up banned.

Flicker out.

[Tempest of Reach]

-_-

Changed number of kits.

[- - F l I c K e R - -]

-_- The only way it could be possible, is if there was one kit, maybe two if the second was younger, and maybe one of them had a disability or something. You still haven't changed the genetic mutation. Like I said, the only way that would be acceptable is if he was blind. If I'm not mistaken, you need those other parts of the eye to be able to see properly. Also, you need to change his knowledge of poisons. You can say 'He has more knowledge on poisons then a lot of clan cats' But, you can't say more then the clan cats. Especially since he's in a clan, and not a medicine cat. (so basically, I'm trying to say, then he can have more knowledge the a lot of the warriors, but the medicine cats, being medicine cats, will always have more knowledge of them then him.)

[Tempest of Reach]

Changed the number of kits...

He has all parts of the eye, but part of it is just a different colour... besides, have you ever seen a cat's eye in darkness? I can't see the white of the eye then...

Medicine cats know about healing! They may have knowledge of posion yes, but they won't have as much knowledge as a cat who uses the posion!

[- - F l I c K e R - -]

It doesn't look like you changed the number of kits =O Anyways, if you haven't noticed, cats don't really have whites in their eyes unless they move there eyes weird.
This is a good example

So I could accept very dark brown eyes that almost look black, but not eyes that are black.

Medicine cats do know about healing, BUT, they also know about poisons. I said this before, they have to in order to be able to cure cats. They're like doctors, their not only trained in healing, but their also trained in what kills. It would be way to easy for him to destroy the whole clan if he had more poison knowledge then the medicine cats.

[Tempest of Reach]

Read again...

True... so his eyes are black, won't do any damage or anything.

They know how to cure posion, Shadowstrike knows than just curing posion...

[fαllεη •]

I've been thinking. You could get away with the eyes, Light, if his pupils are constantly dilated. He wouldn't be able to see in sunlight, but on a cloudy day, even though his eyes would hurt, he might get by. That would give him mostly black eyes, and you could make the iris a darker colour anyway. Although the bright light would damage his eyes, it would probably make him a better night hunter than some other cats, and gives him an excuse to constantly be in shadow ;) Excellent for dramatic effect!

Also, if he were on his own from day one, there's a high likelihood that he wouldn't survive in the dangerous landscape that has been painted for him. A mother's milk is crucial to a kitten's survival, and without it, he would either starve or be stunted for life. Kittens are blind for the first few weeks of their lives, remember, so it would be impossible for him to find his own food.

[Tempest of Reach]

Okay maybe not right from the start...
I like that idea... I like it a lot...

[~ t a n g l e]

Just make it a bit more realistic. He can be sinister but why not it be something like he saw his dad killing them for attacking your cat and he thoughts thats how things were. he turned to be a killer? But a 4 moon old kit could not kill 3 cats. mostly because someone would notice and step in.