can i be in riverclan? -Icewind/she-cat/Warrior

[dawnflight]

Name: Icewind
Family: unknown all mysteriosly died long ago
Rank: Warrior
Clan: RiverClan
Gender: She-Cat
Age: 12 moons
Eye Color: dark sapphire blue
Fur Color: a silverish white and a dark gray tail
Other Appearances:

she looks weak and small yet, she is small she is not weak at all.She also has a dark gray colored tail but if u look closely at it it has a scar on the side of it.She has the tip of her left ear missing too.

Personality:

she has a fun loving,curios personality and at the same time calm.Also,she is often forgetful but, she is still a very loyal warrior who dreams of be coming leader.She is a very good fighter but, never takes lives unless she needs too.She loves to swim not just to hunt but, to just swim.she also likes to figure out stuff which leads her into big trouble.Although forgetful she knows from right to wrong.She wants to be the lead of RiverClan and nothing will stop her from being the best warrior she can be.

History:

When she was born she remembers the screaming and screeching in the darkness.Even though she was weak she manged to get herself to RiverClan camp before she collapsed.The some RiverClan warriors found her and took her back to the camp.They believe the night she was born was also a RiverClan warrior disappeared in the night and Icewind(at the time Icekit) was her kit.They also believed that because she had the scent of RiverClan all over her.So they took her in to be raised as a RiverClan cat.6 moons later she was made a apprentice.She was a great fighter but, she got into a lot of trouble when she was a apprentice.Her mentor Hawktalon admired her curiosity and he also made sure she learned not to be curios because it might lead into something bad.As she trained and trained it was finally time for her to be a warrior.During the ceremony she was so happy she felt like she would explode.Now she serves to be the best warrior she can.

RP Example:

One day Icewind was walking around being forgetful and trying to remember what she was suppose to do until she saw kit who felt into the lake.The kit must of ran away from camp or something she thought.As she pull him out of the lake she realized that he wasn't RiverClan he was ThunderClan.She was surprised about how he got over here on to RiverClan territory.She brought him back to camp to get treated by the medicine cat.Some cats thought they should use this to there advantage to get extra prey since they didn't have much.After the clan meeting about this there was a patrol taking him home since Icewind was the only cat he trusted she carried him home.ThuderClan warriors were confused about how RiverClan brought the missing kit home but, they didn't give RiverClan the extra prey.When they returned to RiverClan although she rescued a kit she had to still return to what she forgot to finish before she rescued the kit.But, when she finish the clan leader rewarded her with the first pick from the fresh kill pile.

Cats you RP: 1
Names of cats: Icewind
Other:

[fαllεη •]

It looks like a good bio, but I'll have to ask you to correct the spelling and grammar mistakes before I'll accept it ;). I've corrected them for you below -should you want it XD- but you might want to read through them, just to make sure that I haven't changed what you wanted to say.

It would be nice, too, if you explained where her scars came from, but that's more for creating depth in her history than an actual requirement :).

Also, a minor point: Icekit crawled her way back to camp, before RiverClan warriors found her and brought her back to camp...? ;).

Other than my minor fusses, she's as good as accepted ^^

Appearance
She looks weak and small, but though she is small she is not weak at all. She has a dark gray-colored tail, but if you look closely at it, it has a scar on the side of it. She has the tip of her left ear missing too.

Personality:
She has a fun-loving, curious personality and at the same time calm. She is often forgetful, but she is still a very loyal warrior who dreams of becoming leader. She is a very good fighter but never takes lives unless she needs to. She loves to swim, not just to hunt but to just swim. She also likes to figure out stuff, which often leads her into trouble. Although forgetful she knows right from wrong. She wants to be the leader of RiverClan and nothing will stop her from being the best warrior she can be.

History:
When she was born she remembers the screaming and screeching in the darkness. Even though she was weak, she managed to get herself to RiverClan camp before she collapsed. Some RiverClan warriors found her and took her back to the camp. They believed that a RiverClan warrior had disappeared in the night and Icewind (at the time Icekit) was her kit: Icekit had the scent of a RiverClan cat. So they took her in to be raised as a RiverClan cat. 6 moons later, she was made an apprentice. She was a great fighter but she got into a lot of trouble when she was a apprentice. Her mentor Hawktalon admired her curiosity, but he also made sure she learned not to be too curious because it might get her into trouble. She trained and trained, until was finally time for her to be a warrior. During the ceremony she was so happy she felt like she would explode. Now she serves her clan, always fighting to be the best warrior she can.

RP Example:
One day, Icewind was walking around being, forgetful and trying to remember what she was supposed to be doing, when she suddenly saw a kit... falling into the lake! [i]'The kit must have ran away from camp or something,'[/i] she thought. As she pulled him out of the lake, she realized that he wasn't RiverClan: he was ThunderClan!
She was surprised: how could he get over here, on to RiverClan territory? But she brought him back to camp to get treated by the medicine cat. Some cats thought they should use this to the Clan's advantage to get extra prey -- RiverClan was going hungry.
After the clan meeting about this, the leader organised a patrol to take him home, Icewind among them. Being the only cat he trusted, Icewind carried the kit home.

The ThunderClan warriors were confused about how RiverClan brought the missing kit home, but they didn't give RiverClan the extra prey.
When they returned to RiverClan, although she had rescued a kit, the young warrior had to still return to what she had been doing [[her hunting?]].
But when she finished, the clan leader rewarded her with the first pick from the fresh kill pile.

[shadowkit]

Name: shadowkit
Family: unknown but thinks of blossmleaf as a mother
Rank: kit
Clan: RiverClan
Gender: She-Cat
Age: 3 moons
Eye Color: hazle eyes
Fur Color: a pure night black coat
Other Appearances: none
Personality:
she has a fun loving, smart, calm, and brave personality. dreams of becoming deputy but has an uncany talent for healing that she is not really aware of it . She loves to swim and is confident that she will always try to get better.
History:
she was picked up by a hawk and when she bit one of the hawks talons it dropped her and she landed on a bush near river clan. for three days she wanderd through river clan terratorry and collapsed at rocky shore starving but luckly blossmleaf who was fishing there at the time heard her mumble a faint help and saved her.

[fαllεη •]

Shadowkit: I PMed you about this bio ;).