Post by Dezrai(Dezzy or RaiRai) on Nov 4, 2010 22:20:00 GMT -5
OOC -
First Name: Evie
Characters: Just this one.
RP Experience/Level: Er, Intermediate I guess.
IC -
Name: Duskpaw
Age: Nearly a warrior
Gender: She-cat
Picture: (optional)
Alliance: ShadowClan
Rank: Apprentice
Appearance: Duskpaw is ginger with a black spot over one eye. She has a black spike going down in between her eyes, which are a dull gray-green. She is small with black paws. She has a white tail-tip and large ears.
Personality: Duskpaw is mischievous and loves fighting and tricking cats. She is rebellious. She keeps her head in bad situations, but has a short temper. Whenever her temper flares, she snorts and rolls her eyes at things she would usually get excited about. She sulks around and talks sarcastically when she's mad at someone. She is usually eager to learn, and rises to challenges. She is always determined to prove those who underestimate her due to her size wrong.
History: Duskpaw was born in ShadowClan. Her father died when she was just 2 moons old. She had a brother, Quickkit. He died of Greencough a moon before their mother died of the very same thing. Her mother, Flickermoon, caught it when Duskpaw was 4 moons. One moon later, her mother died of it. Her father died when on a border patrol, a badger attacked and killed him. In her first few weeks of apprenticeship, she was on a border patrol and smelled fox. She told her mentor, who got the other warriors of the patrol and went after it. They killed it, and Duskpaw has always been very proud of her sense of smell.
RP Example: Duskpaw padded out a camp happily. She paused just outside of camp to sniff the air. Nothing. Not much of a surprise, so close to camp. She thought. She padded on, stopping now and then to sniff the air. Finally she caught a whiff of a plump vole. She hurried silently to get down wind of it. She sniffed the air and scanned the swampy ground, looking for the vole. Finally she heard a faint scrabbling, and swiveled her ears to hear better. She turned in the direction it came from, and saw the little ball of fur. She took one step closer. She crouched and narrowed her eyes, weight on her back paws. Her tail lashed once, and stilled. For a moment she stayed like this, lulling it into a false sense of security. Then, before it could her her moving, she tensed her muscles and leaped at it, landing with it in between her paws. She nipped its neck in a killing bite, and kicked some dirt over it at the base of the tree.
Survey -
How did you find us? GOOGLE!
Favorite part of the site? How active and friendly it is.
Overall, why did you join? I thought it was user friendly, active, and had good background and stuff, which meant the admin knew what they were doing,
What suggestions do you have about our site? Not have quite such huge requirements on bios. Trust me, that can easily scare off a lot of would-be members.
First Name: Evie
Characters: Just this one.
RP Experience/Level: Er, Intermediate I guess.
IC -
Name: Duskpaw
Age: Nearly a warrior
Gender: She-cat
Picture: (optional)
Alliance: ShadowClan
Rank: Apprentice
Appearance: Duskpaw is ginger with a black spot over one eye. She has a black spike going down in between her eyes, which are a dull gray-green. She is small with black paws. She has a white tail-tip and large ears.
Personality: Duskpaw is mischievous and loves fighting and tricking cats. She is rebellious. She keeps her head in bad situations, but has a short temper. Whenever her temper flares, she snorts and rolls her eyes at things she would usually get excited about. She sulks around and talks sarcastically when she's mad at someone. She is usually eager to learn, and rises to challenges. She is always determined to prove those who underestimate her due to her size wrong.
History: Duskpaw was born in ShadowClan. Her father died when she was just 2 moons old. She had a brother, Quickkit. He died of Greencough a moon before their mother died of the very same thing. Her mother, Flickermoon, caught it when Duskpaw was 4 moons. One moon later, her mother died of it. Her father died when on a border patrol, a badger attacked and killed him. In her first few weeks of apprenticeship, she was on a border patrol and smelled fox. She told her mentor, who got the other warriors of the patrol and went after it. They killed it, and Duskpaw has always been very proud of her sense of smell.
RP Example: Duskpaw padded out a camp happily. She paused just outside of camp to sniff the air. Nothing. Not much of a surprise, so close to camp. She thought. She padded on, stopping now and then to sniff the air. Finally she caught a whiff of a plump vole. She hurried silently to get down wind of it. She sniffed the air and scanned the swampy ground, looking for the vole. Finally she heard a faint scrabbling, and swiveled her ears to hear better. She turned in the direction it came from, and saw the little ball of fur. She took one step closer. She crouched and narrowed her eyes, weight on her back paws. Her tail lashed once, and stilled. For a moment she stayed like this, lulling it into a false sense of security. Then, before it could her her moving, she tensed her muscles and leaped at it, landing with it in between her paws. She nipped its neck in a killing bite, and kicked some dirt over it at the base of the tree.
Survey -
How did you find us? GOOGLE!
Favorite part of the site? How active and friendly it is.
Overall, why did you join? I thought it was user friendly, active, and had good background and stuff, which meant the admin knew what they were doing,
What suggestions do you have about our site? Not have quite such huge requirements on bios. Trust me, that can easily scare off a lot of would-be members.
