Crystalpaw-Apprentice- She-cat-Thunderclan

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Name: Crystalpaw
Family: There is nothing known about her family at all. She remembers not having any littermates, except for one, but she doesn't remember her parents at all.
Rank: Apprentice
Clan: ThunderClan
Gender: Female
Age: 7 moons
Eye Color: Jade Green
Fur Color: From the top of her head to the top of her tail is dark brown. From the bottom of her head to the bottom of her tail is light brown.
Other Appearances:

Personality:
Crystalpaw is a very generous and kind cat. She will help however she can, and is very loyal to her Clan. However, she tends to be a little afriad of snakes, and shows to be a good climber. She is very smart, and not afraid to show it. One day, she hopes to be Crystalstar, the best Thunderclan leader of them all.
History: Crystalpaw was found on the border as a 2 month old kit. She was taken back to Thunderclan and given to a queen. As she grew, she became very loyal to Thunderclan and soon doesn't remember anything of her past family at all. All she remembers today is that she had a littermate...but that's all.
RP Example: She sniffed the air once more, then leaped, and finally, she got that same squirrel. Soon, everyone else followed. After a while, they had a whole pile of fresh kill, therefore, they brought it back to camp.
RP Example:
Crystalpaw was with a patrol out on Thunderclan grounds. She sniffed the air carefully. Suddenly, she crouched down, leaped, and...missed on a squirrel! The patrol laughed, and Crystalpaw felt ashamed. She looked over at her mentor, and remembered that it happens to everybody sometimes. She smiled in remembrance.
Cats you RP: So far, nada.
Names of cats: None
Other:

[Nick (admin)]

Please give a little more on history and your rp example.

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History:
KIT~ As a kit, Crystalkit has always loved her Clan. She did whatever she could to help the warriors and apprentices, even though they quickly shooed her away. Because they've been shooing her away, Crystalkit thought that maybe she isn't wanted here. But, her friends would always prove her wrong.
APPRENTICE~ Now an apprentice, Crystalpaw still helps out, although some of the time other cats still shoo her away. She feels insecure about her place in the Clan, but she is as loyal as can be. She is an excellent fighter and wonderful listener-although no one else ever notices.

RP Example (cont'd):
Suddenly, Crystalpaw's ears shot up. She sniffed the air and pounced once more-this time, she got another squirrel. She buried her prey and continued on her way as others in her patrol hunted as well. When they were done, they had their fair share of prey to bring back.

is this good?

[Nick (admin)]

Yup. Sorry about the code having problems. Accepted.