can i join?,Silverfur,Queen, she-cat

[warriorss]

Name: Silverfur
Family: she has three kits: moonkit, Ivykit, and shinekit (i will add them soon)
Rank: Queen
Clan: RiverClan
Gender: She-Cat
Age: 12 moons
Eye Color: ice-blue
Fur Color: silver tabby with white chest
Other Appearances:

she is slender. she is strong for a she-cat. she is about 4 lbs. and is normal sized

Personality:

she is caring, nice, can be a bit strict, she is slender and strong, and smart.

History:

she had a brother named needlepaw. he died as an apprentice in a battle. she loved her brother and he was the closest thing she had. she wished that she had died instead of him.her mentor was dawnfur. Dawnfur was a light ginger she-cat with amber eyes. Dawnfur was a lively young warrior. Silverfur had alot of fun training with her. she eventully got over her brothers death when she became a warrior. she liked to go fishing and swimming. she loved to play with leaves and bramble. she enjoys helping her clan.

RP Example:

(before the kits) Silverfur walked out of the warriors den and streched. She walked over to the fresh-kill pile. She took a fish and sat down. She should go hunting after this. It was getting low and many of the cats would wake up hungry. She finished the vole off with a few bites. Silverfur bounded out the entrance. She ran twored the river she sat down and took in the background for a moment. Then she bent over the shining water and lifted a paw. A silver streak flashed in the water. Silverfur shot her paw out and flung the fish out. she fished utill she had 3 nice sized fish, Especially in leaf-bare. she walked over to the fish and was about to take them back to camp when she heard a scuffleing umong the bushes. she opened her mouth to drink in the air. water vole! she thought. she pin- pionted the direction of the vole and droped into the hunters crouch. she stalked untill she saw the small body of the vole chewing on a seed. she bunched up her huanches and sprung. she finished it with a quick slash of her paw. she picked it up and walked up to the fish. she walked towards the camp ehr jaws full of prey.

Cats you RP: 1
Names of cats: silverfur
Other:

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Please try to use proper sentences, and capitalize the first letter in each sentence. Your personality needs 5 more sentences, just one sentence doesn't give us enough information.

[warriorss]

Name: Silverfur
Family: she has three kits: Moonkit, Ivykit, and Shinekit (I will add them soon)
Rank: Queen
Clan: RiverClan
Gender: She-Cat
Age: 12 moons
Eye Color: Ice-blue
Fur Color: Silver tabby with white chest
Other Appearances:
She is slender. She is strong for a she-cat. She is about 4 lbs. and is normal sized
Personality:
She is caring, nice, and can be a bit strict. She is slender and strong, smart and Loyal. She will fight for her clan untill there is breath in her body. Adventurous and energetic. She is outgoing and skilful, in hunting and fighting. She can be fierce, and has a "sharp tongue".
History:
She had a brother named needlepaw. He died as an apprentice in a battle. She loved her brother and he was the closest thing she had. She wished that she had died instead of him. Her mentor was Dawnfur. Dawnfur was a light ginger she-cat with amber eyes. Dawnfur was a lively young warrior. Silverfur had alot of fun training with her. She eventully got over her brothers death when she became a warrior. She liked to go fishing and swimming. she loved to play with leaves and bramble. she enjoys helping her clan.
RP Example:
(before the kits) Silverfur walked out of the warriors den and streched. She walked over to the fresh-kill pile. She took a fish and sat down. She should go hunting after this. It was getting low and many of the cats would wake up hungry. She finished the fish off with a few bites. Silverfur bounded out the entrance. She ran twored the river she sat down and took in the background for a moment. Then she bent over the shining water and lifted a paw. A silver streak flashed in the water. Silverfur shot her paw out and flung the fish out. She fished utill she had 3 nice sized fish, Especially in leaf-bare. she walked over to the fish and was about to take them back to camp when she heard a scuffleing umong the bushes. She opened her mouth to drink in the air. Water vole! she thought. She pin- pionted the direction of the vole and droped into the hunters crouch. She stalked untill she saw the small body of the vole chewing on a seed. She bunched up her huanches and sprung. She finished it with a quick slash of her paw. She picked it up and walked up to the fish. She walked towards the camp ehr jaws full of prey.
Cats you RP: 1
Names of cats: silverfur
Other:

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Heh, can you please modify your initial post, rather than reposting the bio? It just makes it easier when people look up your cat :) Also, I don't mean to trouble you, but your queen needs to have a mate before she can be accepted with kits :). You're welcome to make a post in the 'needs' board for someone to make him a bio, but you will need to mention him in your history :).