Dusk

[duskflight]

Name: Dusk
Family: Miles(deceased sister),Broken(brother.
Rank: Warrior
Type: Rouge
Gender: She-Cat
Age: 17 moons old.
Eye Color: Green
Fur Color: Black
Other Appearances:

Beautiful she-cat with white paws,chest,and tail tip.She has amazingly tiny white spots on her belly.Her white tipped tail came from her mother.

Personality:

She has become alert and frightened of Twolegs for taking her brother away from her.She is also lonely for being
seperated from her brother and her sister's death of some
sickness.Her eagerness leads her halfway to the clan cats
territory,but too far away for them to see her.She has been living alone for almost 5 moons now and is very solitary torward other rogues.Dusk is always ready for a fight and she almost believes 'StarClan'.But she is very scared of the very thought of dead cats living in the sky.She thinks her great grandfather is Jayfeather and she is proud having one of the three as her kin.But she still wonders why she didn't end up in clan.Dusk is very kind to other cats.She also is kind of solitary.But she will anything if the clans in trouble,even though they don't know her.

History:

She grew up not knowing her parents,as they abandoned Dusk,Miles,and Broken.But she does wish she did know them.As her sister died of some sort of sickness and her brother taken away by Twolegs she was lonely and scared of what might happen to her.She grew up in an old badger hole,but she still lives there today.She always wondered what clan cats are like,and she'd love to meet one,but unfortunely,she has become afraid of her future.She tried once but succeded because of her shyness.She had thought the clan cats looked a little well-fed than her.Dusk only remembers one thing about her mother and father:their fur color.She has had one sickness:whitecough,she had it when she was 6moons old but it wore off by then.Thank goodness it was cured.

RP Example:

Dusk climbed the tree she usually climbed to watch the clan cats.They looked so happy.They had a high pile of prey.The little ones playing outside looked happy and delightful.She sighed.

Cats you RP: 1
Names of cats: Dusk
Other:

Dusk is happy most of the time!

[fαllεη •]

All right, it's all good :)
I love her bio so far, but you just need three more sentences in personality to meet the minimum. (I'm so sorry to have to do this to you XD.)

[duskflight]

I accidently started a new paragraph on my personality .

[fαllεη •]

Then just go back to the line and backspace it ;). I'll do it for you if you want...? XD

I'm not sure whether Fast is OK with cats being accepted as kin of any canons, but given that we're a long way past them, and Dusk only thinks she's related, I think that that's perfectly fine. (Though I wonder how she knows this if she never knew her parents ;).
I'm so sorry to keep going at you about this bio (yes, I am a fussy freak! XD), but we have already not accepted a bio on this account: we need to know how she survived if her parents abandoned her. A kit cannot survive on its own from birth, especially as they cannot see properly until ten weeks after birth, and need their mother to keep them warm until they are about three weeks.
You have a really interesting bio here, and I can see she's going to be a lot of fun to role-play with, but we need some of the basic things before I'm comfortable accepting it XD.