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Post by autumnj98 on Dec 1, 2010 14:23:15 GMT -5
Cats Name:Fawnpaw
Cats Age: 7 moons
Gender: She-cat
Alliance:Thunderclan
Rank:Apprentice
Appearance:fluffy cream-and-white she-cat with brown flecks and blue eyes
Personality:loyal brave kind generous
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Post by fαllεη • on Dec 1, 2010 14:34:08 GMT -5
Hello, Autumn, and let me just say what a pleasure it is to welcome you to the site :).
However, I'm afraid there are a few things that we have to do to the lovely Fawnpaw before she can be accepted.
First off, we have a specific form that we'd like you to use for making your cat :). Have a look here and read through our requirements, and then come back here and hit the 'modify' button at the top of your post and paste in the new form.
Second, we try to help everyone become really great role-players here, so we have a sentence minimum to try to help you out. It says under our bio form how many sentences you need per area; four in appearance, eight in personality, a ten-sentence history for apprentices and the same length for a role-play sample. Don't worry if that all seems like a bit much: you can contact me at any time to ask about anything on the site :) (If you want to send me a message, click the  just above the 'join date' in my mini-profile :))
My first recommendation if you're having trouble: always more! You've told us she's kind: is she kind to other clans, or just to her own? Tell us how she'll react if someone offends her, what her belief in StarClan is like. Say for example she's tired. Will this affect her mood, or does she hide that away and always try to stay cheerful? Remember, flaws are as good as virtues when it comes to fleshing out a character, and they prevent your character from looking like a Mary-Sue --a character who is unrealistic and perfect (or even imperfect) in every way.
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